No-one hopes more than me that my children's mystery / adventure novel Smugglers at Whistling Sands will make it big one day. But I'm going to have to cut it loose a bit now to make space for turning my attention to a second novel.
Smugglers is out there, it is on Amazon, it is available for anyone who wants it and for only 77p, or the Dollar or Euro equivalents. I've had a fair bash at direct marketing and I've run three free promotion days on Amazon now, including the weekend just gone. I would like to spend more time pushing it but if I do, then I will leave myself very little time to write anything new.
I've spent countless hours on a major rewrite during the winter, particularly of its closing chapters and made it a much better book in the process. But psychologically, I've got to "put the book down" in my mind, to free myself up for the next one.
Readers will make their own minds up about Smugglers. I am strongly of the belief that a good book will ultimately sell itself and generate its own momentum, through customer reviews and word of mouth.
I am delighted that in the last few days alone, I've had two really positive reviews, one on Amazon.com and the other on Amazon.co.uk, this latest one as follows:
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars excellent characterisation, 3 Mar 2012
By septempopuli (UK) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Smugglers at Whistling Sands (Kindle Edition)
A really well-written book, fast paced with excellent characterisation. It has echoes of Enid Blyton's holiday adventures, certainly, but is still wholly original. And just as Blyton was famous for her sequels, so please let's have a follow-up!
It is reviews like that, from complete strangers who owe me nothing, that can really help to launch unknown authors. That's why I would ask all of you out there who have downloaded a book you have really enjoyed - whether it be mine or someone else's - to take the trouble to leave a few words to tell others what you thought of it.
You don't have to write reams, or re-tell the plot in great detail (in fact, it's best not to!) - simply give your honest view and why you liked it. Very few people bother to do that but it is hugely appreciated by any author, particularly those seeking to establish their name.
So my hope for Smugglers at Whistling Sands is that it will get more reviews over time, particularly from another batch of free downloads. On which note, I was rather taken aback and disappointed over the weekend that I did not have anywhere near as many downloads this time during my two-day promotion. (By the way, you have to enroll in KDP Select in order to offer readers up to five days of free promotions over three months. This ties you to Kindle Direct Publishing for those months and you can't sell your book anywhere else in that period).
It was only intended to be a single day - Saturday - but I notched up only around 60 downloads so I let the promotion run on Sunday as well. But in total I managed only some 125 downloads, of which marginally more were on Amazon.com. How different from two weeks ago when I got over 300 on a single day!
Why the slow-down? I don't know. I think I wasn't picked up by the Twitter and website aggregators as happened the first time. On a brighter note, I had some excellent backing from a leading member of the Enid Blyton Society who downloaded my book, recommended it on the society forums and put out a tweet from the society to several thousand followers. So that might bear fruit in some form.
Nonetheless, more than 500 people have downloaded a copy of Smugglers now, if you add together free and paid-for copies. If it is a good book, as I hope, then momentum will start to build.
As I say, I would love to do more to make that happen but I must try to combine novel-writing ambitions with a full-time job and helping bring up our two young children - which is a job and a half in itself! Above all, I must create space in my head to think about my next writing project.
I am burning now to crack on with it so I will wish Lou, Jack, David and Emily well in getting more readers - I think they deserve them and I will write a sequel about them if they do. It was very pleasing that the latest reviewer expressed a hope that I would do so.
But my second novel is likely to be quite different. Different how, you ask? I don't know, I don't know what it is about yet. I haven't started it. I haven't even started planning it. I just know I'm really excited about knuckling down to it. Watch this space!
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Monday, March 05, 2012
Saturday, September 17, 2011
An annoying setback - but what can you do?
To my disappointment, someone has been on my Amazon listing and given the two excellent reviews I have received so far for Smugglers at Whistling Sands the thumbs down. Now, the first one is rated three people out of four find the review helpful, and the other that two out of three find it helpful.
I just find it annoying that someone, under the cloak of anonymity, should do that to me. Have they taken the trouble to leave their own review, explaining what they liked and presumbly what they did not? No, of course they haven't.
Have they commented on the two reviews I have received to date, explaining why they don't agree with them? No, of course they haven't. Instead they have just quietly, effortlessly used the thumbs down sign.
Have they even read the book? Who knows! It has crossed my mind whether it is from a rival author / publisher out there. Perhaps I shouldn't read too much into it, I just think when you go to the trouble of seeking to knock a fledgling novelist like me and imply that my book isn't even worth the 86p I'm asking for it - whoever it is might at least explain why.
Whether it will knock future sales I don't know - I've just got to hope others continue to buy it, and hopefully I will pick up some more reviews - not necessarily five star as my current two are - but honest crits, which hopefully will be more positive than negative.
My sales have now reached 33 - they definitely don't appear to be exactly taking off, but it is still early days yet and I am, frankly, doing next to nothing to promote my book - I really need to find the time to do so.
I just find it annoying that someone, under the cloak of anonymity, should do that to me. Have they taken the trouble to leave their own review, explaining what they liked and presumbly what they did not? No, of course they haven't.
Have they commented on the two reviews I have received to date, explaining why they don't agree with them? No, of course they haven't. Instead they have just quietly, effortlessly used the thumbs down sign.
Have they even read the book? Who knows! It has crossed my mind whether it is from a rival author / publisher out there. Perhaps I shouldn't read too much into it, I just think when you go to the trouble of seeking to knock a fledgling novelist like me and imply that my book isn't even worth the 86p I'm asking for it - whoever it is might at least explain why.
Whether it will knock future sales I don't know - I've just got to hope others continue to buy it, and hopefully I will pick up some more reviews - not necessarily five star as my current two are - but honest crits, which hopefully will be more positive than negative.
My sales have now reached 33 - they definitely don't appear to be exactly taking off, but it is still early days yet and I am, frankly, doing next to nothing to promote my book - I really need to find the time to do so.
Thursday, August 18, 2011
Another sale, and my thoughts are turning to reviews . . .
I had the fourth sale of Smugglers this afternoon and it is a funny feeling to think that, with the exception of my first buyer, who hails from Canada, I have no idea who the other three are.
Could they be the next door neighbour but one, could it be a family member? A work colleague? The fact is, almost nobody knows about my ebook and all members of my family are under instructions not to buy it off Amazon which is currently the only place I have my it for sale. I simply want to feel that any purchase is a genuine one, ie. one made by a stranger or a sworn enemy or something - not my best mate, or a sympathetic neighbour, or a kindly in-law who feels I need a little encouragement.
And the other thing is, will the book get reviewed - I can be pretty sure one of those buyers will review it but not necessarily the others. I do feel a slight feeling of unease that anyone anywhere in the world can download my book and just read it for themselves. My first buyer, who is himself writing a book, expressed that very emotion in an email to me and it made me realise I feel the same way.
I suppose it is easy to be nervous about any possible criticism but it is through critical appraisal that we all learn and all fledgling novelists should remind themselves that the greatest writers in history have their critics and indeed, from Shakespeare through to the likes of Thomas Hardy, have stuff to their name that is, shall we say, not their best.
It's interesting that my favourite author, George Orwell, so disliked his early two novels A Clergyman's Daughter and Keep The Aspidistra Flying that after early print runs, he refused to allow them to be reprinted in his lifetime. I enjoyed reading both, but in particular, Keep The Aspidistra Flying - a harrowing tale of a struggling writer who could barely make ends meet and felt worthless in the process. There is some very powerful, and at times poetic language by Orwell and I only wish he had written more of this type of book.
Anyway, enough of Mr Orwell for one evening, it is already nearly half past midnight here in North Wales and I could go on about him all night, and after another tiring day on the paper (working from home today though, not the office) I probably ought to get to bed.
Could they be the next door neighbour but one, could it be a family member? A work colleague? The fact is, almost nobody knows about my ebook and all members of my family are under instructions not to buy it off Amazon which is currently the only place I have my it for sale. I simply want to feel that any purchase is a genuine one, ie. one made by a stranger or a sworn enemy or something - not my best mate, or a sympathetic neighbour, or a kindly in-law who feels I need a little encouragement.
And the other thing is, will the book get reviewed - I can be pretty sure one of those buyers will review it but not necessarily the others. I do feel a slight feeling of unease that anyone anywhere in the world can download my book and just read it for themselves. My first buyer, who is himself writing a book, expressed that very emotion in an email to me and it made me realise I feel the same way.
I suppose it is easy to be nervous about any possible criticism but it is through critical appraisal that we all learn and all fledgling novelists should remind themselves that the greatest writers in history have their critics and indeed, from Shakespeare through to the likes of Thomas Hardy, have stuff to their name that is, shall we say, not their best.
It's interesting that my favourite author, George Orwell, so disliked his early two novels A Clergyman's Daughter and Keep The Aspidistra Flying that after early print runs, he refused to allow them to be reprinted in his lifetime. I enjoyed reading both, but in particular, Keep The Aspidistra Flying - a harrowing tale of a struggling writer who could barely make ends meet and felt worthless in the process. There is some very powerful, and at times poetic language by Orwell and I only wish he had written more of this type of book.
Anyway, enough of Mr Orwell for one evening, it is already nearly half past midnight here in North Wales and I could go on about him all night, and after another tiring day on the paper (working from home today though, not the office) I probably ought to get to bed.
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